Autumn
The autumn leaves fall like confetti at a birthday party.
The yellow and orange leaves look like a fluffy colourful quilt.
The trees with their colorful leaves look like maori patterns.
The orange leaves look like the afternoon sun.
The evergreen trees stand out like bright green shoes on a rugby field.
The red autumn leaves look like they have been painted.
Watch out! Autumn’s here!
I love your poem and I love the pictures that your words make for me.
ReplyDeleteMy favourite line is..."The yellow and orange leaves look like a fluffy colourful quilt"
A very good poem.
Mum
I love your poem and I love the pictures that your words make for me.
ReplyDeleteMy favourite line is..."The yellow and orange leaves look like a fluffy colourful quilt"
A very good poem.
Mum
Kirsten there are not full stops at the end at every sentence but good job
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