Learning Journey

Friday, 22 May 2015

Hunted

One dark night in the middle of a forest a jungle boy was roaming. Suddenly he felt hungry and smelt some food. He felt something in his belly so he looked down and his belly was rumbling. He sniffed the air and the smell was still there. He went wondering around and over big boxes to find the food. Suddenly he saw the food which was a cooked chicken.  He ran to the chicken but the floor under him was a trap he fell through the trap and found himself face to face with a hunter. The hunter blinded him and when he could see again he was  upside down the hunter walked over to him and bit the last piece of meat of the bone he said it would be the jungle boys lucky day. But the jungle boY did not think that it was his lucky day so he broke the bone it was a wishbone when he broke it realized that it could help him to unlock the padlock but he had to wait till the hunter was occupied suddenly the hunter got a call from his friend asking him if he’d got the jungle boy
the hunter said yes and that he would meet the queen.Sudenly the hunter heard something the boy had escaped the hunter got very angry.He saw the boy as he jumped out of his tent.  Both of them started running  the boy got to thew hole that he fell through he saw the camera that blinded him and dived for it the hunter got him and made him angry so the jungle boy blinded the hunter and started running the jungle boy ran through a cage and the huter banged into it when the hunter woke up he was op high and the jungle boy was holding the cage and the hunter heard music and looked down and saw so many jungle boys.

Tuesday, 12 May 2015

My First Narrative

Volcano Island

“How much longer do we have to be on this ship?” asked Dana. “Until we find an island to stay on,” pronounced Kirsten. Just then the ship hit something. Bang! I looked down and saw a beautiful island. ”Now we can get out of the ship,” confirmed Kirsten. But just as the girls pushed down the ladder the ship fell apart.
What a lovely island, lots of leaves covered the ground and the trees had pink flowers on them. “How are we going to leave?” asked Dana. Kirsten ignored her as she loved the island and didn’t care if they stayed here. ”Let’s go build a shelter because it’s getting dark,” pronounced Kirsten. “But we do not know what kind of dangers are out there, ”said Dana in a scared voice. “Well if we hurry up maybe we will make it before it gets dark,” Kirsten exclaimed as she headed off. The girls made two beds and a shelter. When they woke up Kirsten felt something on her leg so she picked it up. “Ahhhhh” It was a baby butter snake. Dana came rushing into the wooden tent. ”What's wrong!” yelled Dana “A butter snake was on my leg!” screamed Kirsten. “Wait, what's that sound” asked Dana. “Sounds like a volcano is erupting” pronounced Kirsten. The girls rushed outside, a volcano, that they did not see before, was erupting. “The lava is making it’s way down” screamed Dana. “I’ll cook some food and you go gather wood” said Kirsten. “Ok but how does this help us get away from the lava?” replied Dana. “You will see,” said Kirsten.
As both girls worked away the lava got closer and closer to them. Suddenly Kirsten said “Ok we need to build a raft.” “Ohhhh now I get it,” pronounced Dana. The girls worked as the lava was getting closer. The lava was only three feet away from them. “We need to jump in with the food and sail away, fast,” screamed Kirsten. The two girls got home safely and were ready for another adventure.