Maths Term 4

Kia Ora,
A couple weeks ago we did a maths test, and our teacher has made us a results sheet so we can see our score we got, here is a picture of my results sheet...

Seas and Oceans Thinglink

Kia ora This is an activity we did using the Thinglink app. This is the second time I have made something using Thinglink so I hope someone will give me some feedback. Ka kite ano

Recount

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Here is the recount I wrote  for an Asttle writing test in Week 4.  Our teacher marked all our recounts and gave us our scores. Mine came out at Level 3p   which is just above the end of year standard for Year Five. I got the best points for structure and the lowest points for vocabulary. 

We helped each other improve them by reading each other’s recount and talking about them. We also used Revision Assistant to help edit each other’s story and Mrs B added some notes as well. Everyone in our room likes Revision Assistant because it’s easy to understand the marks/ notes that it puts on your writing and so it’s quick for us to go and do the fix-ups. We have to have practically perfect grammar, punctuation and spelling in our stories before we are allowed to publish them here. I hope someone will give me some feedback.

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“We are Bored”yelled me and my cousin Jack.

My Grandpa stared at us with disbelief.”Then go play on the tramp”Grandpa muttered. “Ok” Jack muttered back.After what felt to be a whole hour my Grandpa yelled “I have the best idea ever.” We stopped jumping and turned to Grandpa. He said that himself,Grandma,Mum my Aunty Sarah and Uncle Craig had decided to take us to Snow Planet.

“Whats Snow Planet” I asked. Jack grabbed my shoulders put me on his back and said “Only the amazing inside skiing place where I learned to ski”

“Where is it then”  I asked. “That for me to know and you to find out”he said as he let me slide off his back. After what felt like two hours in the car we arrived. “That was quick” I said under my breath. Everyone else seemed so excited to go skiing again but I sort of felt a little out of place. After my grandpa ordered our skis, Jack ran to the the locker shoved his wallet in and pulled his boots on. He grabbed his skis and ran out onto the fake snow.

I had to sit down so that grandpa could put my skis on.

For about five whole of hours  skiing I was very very tired so I joined grandma in the snow planet cafe and had two big cups of hot coco.

When we got home I lay on my bed and thought about how I would be a champion skier one day and felt happy and still filled with excitement from the big day.

Chinese fishbone diagram

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This is an activity we did when we were learning about animals that live in China. We started studying China last week because it was Chinese language week and we have a student in our room who is half Chinese.

Something I think I have done well  is describing the colour, but

next time I think I could improve on the classification box.
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Mt. Ruapehu Art

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This is an activity we did when we were learning how to use Google Draw.

Something I think I have done well  is using descriptive words but

next time I think I could improve my drawing skills.

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Thank you letter to Pipers lodge

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This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write a thank you letter.

Something I think I have done well using describing words but

next time I think I could improve my pesentaition.

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Room 9

Ohaeawai Primary

Tennyson Street

Ohaeawai 0472

Dear Piper’s Lodge

I am writing to thank you very much for looking after us so well during our stay last week I loved your food.

I really enjoyed the whole week because your beds were comfy, your bathrooms were clean and fresh and your meals were delicious. My favourite meal was the fish and chips.

I hope I can come and stay at Piper’s Lodge again, one day.

Yours sincerely

Kirsten Clark

The Ski Trip

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This is an activity we did when we were writing about how we felt about skiing.

Something I think I have done well  is sharing my feelings.

Next time I think I could improve my layout as my teacher had to show me how to set my sentences out a bit better.

Ka kite ano

The Ski Trip


At last everything my mum had taught me about skiing was about to pay off. But.....I still had a few things to learn like how to turn and so on.

After a few fails I finally knew how to ski and after a few hours I was flying down the slopes in a fuzzy blur. It was glorious.