Writing Wk2 T1

Here is my unassisted recount that I did this week. We didn’t get any help from the teacher. We have made copies so that our friends can help  us improve them.

Basic Facts

Today we practiced our basic facts Stage 5 Level 2. This took me six minutes.

My whole Numbers diagnostic Test.

This is a Year 5 test and it was tricky.I did really well t reading numbers.

Iron Man

Procedure for Healthy Hambuger

Procedure Writing!!  

Martin the Alien has arrived on Earth and he wants to know how to make a Healthy Hamburger. Here is a procedure using the correct structure and language, to instruct Martin on how to make my favourite healthy hamburger.

Title:Healthy hamburger

Ingredients/Materials:

• Plain buns
• Cheese
• Meat patty
• Tomato sauce
• Spiced ham

Method:

1.Cut the bun in the middle with a bread knife.

2.Place the meat patties into a pan and then on to the stove.

3.Turn on the stove and put the timer on for 10 mins.

4.Slowly flip the patty and wait another 10 mins.

5.Flick the tomato sauce can open.

6.Place the now cooked patty on the bottom bun.

7.Cut the long piece of spiced ham and plop it on top of the patty.

8.Pour the tomato sauce on the spiced ham.

9.Plop the cheese onto the tomato sauce.

10.Taste, eat and Enjoy

Cup of koko

JUMP ROPE

JUMP ROPE

Ring! The bell went for snack. We all ran out to get our

lunchboxes then ran to sit down. “Yum yum yum” I said

eating a Tim tam ring. We put our lunchboxes and ran to the court. “OK,” said one of the teachers time for jump rope. My favorite station was freestyle because I like jumping by myself. Then came the jump off. Five classes went before us. Finally “Room 9,” a teacher called, “time to get on.” We all ran on and grabbed a rope and started jumping. Lots of people stopped and sat down before us but I kept going. Then I hit my toe on the ground and had to sit down.